I have gathered all 15 feedback forms and collated them as many comments are similar therefore I have created an average rating, general positive comments and areas for improvement.
Average rating out of 5:
(4.3)Positive comments:
+ Lip syncing - in time and convinsing+ Use of cutting - in time with music/good pacing
+ Use of superimposition and other editing techniques e.g. reverse, sped up, etc.
+ Good use of lighting
+ Good mise-en-scene (make up, costume, black background) all appropriate to genre
+ Good use of transitions
Areas for improvement:
- More variety of shots- Different locations
We believe that from this feedback of our final draft that we are happy to submit this as our final production, the rating and positive comments reflected our music video in a very positive light and we are extremely happy with the feedback given. As for the areas of improvement, we believe that we did a range of shots that were appropriate because we didn't want to flood the video and make it too 'messy' with so many different shots all over the place, we believe that we used a variety appropriately, for example, the use of extreme close up, close up, mid shot, long shot - all used within the fast cuts of myself, as well as this we used tracking shots, pan up, wide shots, etc. For the more locations comment for improvement, this could have been incorporated, however for practicality we decided that 3 locations (not including the timelapse), was sufficient and suited the song well - again making the video less 'messy.'
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